- One thing I can’t figure out is why love is so complicated, when no one will listen, and no one will care. What’s the point of love is all you do is get rejected by the one love. But are you sure is love, Am I sure it’s love. Because all that’s blocking my heart is the dark shadows. All that fills my mind is the useless, sorrowful thoughts. Not because I got rejected by his soft tender words but because I got rejected by his insensitive crushed thoughts. I’m not a mind reader but I know what he’s thinking. Look at me; I’m not beautiful but just an ordinary average girl still trying to find her way in this cold unknown world. I break my mother’s heart just by the way I use my insensitive desolate voice. I break my own heart just by my mournful unbearable thoughts.
- Title: why can' t he notice me
- Artist: -Toykio-
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- Date: 10/20/2009
- Tags: notice
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ShateredLife - 07/21/2010
- that is good i like it
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- Mistress Of Evil Shadows - 07/12/2010
- i thought it was a good poem, like a 7 out of 10! thats good, it could use a little more work...
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- JacKiin a Parad0x - 03/30/2010
- The content makes me go ewwie, but the illustration totally makes up for it. 3/5
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- Just-IZ The Everliving - 01/21/2010
- thinkiing to much on love will blind the smartest person to the fact its a feeling not something you can disect
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- Kalistone 13 Crystal - 12/12/2009
- I realy like it!!! I love the part were u were getting rejected because u were not that beautiful & just a ordinary average girl. Will done!!! JOB!!!
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- ursuckurrrr - 12/05/2009
- nice jobbb [:
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- ShushiLova - 11/26/2009
- that was touching. you should be a writer, id buy your books.
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