New Hell

• Artist: Draconis Alduari
• Description: This is basically a song I wrote for my band.
  It would be nice for me to get many peoples opinions on it.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: hell

Tears welling up, ready to cry.
An emotional mess.
She walks through the woods.
Blind to her reasons,
She stumbles on.

A bright light ahead,
Curiosity overwhelms.
Into the light she steps.
Never did she think she'd find,
A world far beyond her wildest dreams.

A land of great wonder.
Or so she thought...

Fire bursts into the air,
The earth breaks
And the sky turns black

Demons and monsters
As far as the eye could see.
Hypnotic creatures calling her forth.

Telling her of evil deeds
That no mortal man could ever imagine
Done to another foe.
The darkness flows from the trees
Encircling her heart

As she turns her back to leave
From whence she came
The path she just walked
Is now a great blaze

No longer is she in a land
Of hopes and wonders,
But in a new Hell

Comments

[Draconis Alduari]

actually, we are working on putting music in there........ if you want to listen to us, you should add us on myspace.com/brokeninshadows

[Veteran Ranger]

dude thats briliant!! im thinking of a good set of music to go with it, do you have a rhyming scheme to it?

[CrazyWolve]

koolaid music isnt all abought rhyming jeeze people need to stop listening to pop and raap it getts annoying.... its realy nice shadow keep up the good work oh uhh that dosent apply here ... XD

[salvadorkali]

so cool dude! rated it a 5 star but shudda been an 200

[Draconis Alduari]

this is for a metal band...... metal bands don't rhyme very often

[Koolaidpopsicle]

If this is a song, I think maybe you should try rhyming a little more. :]