where is commitment?

• Artist: Sagebomb
• Description: years, they end in a moment.
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: where commitment love loss

Trust is something slowly earned, yet so fast to break
A heart is where our feelings are, yet so fast to break

All this time we had together, my soul I gave to you
Even through all the struggles, my soul I gave to you

When we started talking, I knew you challenged me
When I thought I was strong, I knew you challenged me

As the days, weeks and months past, my heart grew for you
All the times you shared yourself, my heart grew for you

Little stories of our lives, many smiles shared
Cutesy little antidotes, many smiles shared

All those times I was feeling down, you showed you cared
When I did something stupid, you showed you cared

Then I gave myself to you, you said yes
All the future laid out for us, you said yes

And when the day came around, you said goodbye
and as I dropped and fell apart, that's when my heart died.

Comments

[__xiiMiR0cK3nR4iNb0Ws0cKz]

aww how sad,5/5

[Ammi_Kay]

OMG it reminds me of me and my boyfriend cause he doesn't love me anymore and he's too shy to say goodbye. This is so sad I think I might cry. 5 stars! You have talent.

[PuppetsMask]

I like it (:
5/5

[sasuke the lone wolf]

awesome

[fannygasm]

wow, only 2 comments. That is some touchy stuff.....Very poetic...Show off your skills in a thread?
5/5 but a bit heartbreaking crying

[ThrilIer]

I was on your thread browsing around just to chat in random forums and browsing ^^. And I saw that in a reply to a person that the link to this poem would explain why you were so upset, and also giving away that much gold. o: I'm sorry to hear this happened to you. ): This is going into my favourites and earning a 5/5. This poem is just so beautiful. I hope you recover from this! ^ ^ you truely have wrote a masterpiece!

[xiimike]

Bravo Bravo! made me wanna cry in real life :'( {{no homo}}