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Look at me
Me, with an expression undecipherable
With eyes not a single colour, but myriad shades of grey
I walk, and the confused world below convulses with distrust
I talk, and the words compose themselves into a harmony of paradoxes
A mere facade: half concealing, half revealing
But you don’t even know what to look for
So you look up; look past the clouds, beyond the sky,
Only to find an emptiness devoid of the answers you seek
Ensnared into a reverie in which your anguished tears will never be kissed dry,
You question every birth, every death and every intake of breath in between
Locked in a destined embrace with your one true love, your hearts intertwine,
Yet I settle in the infinitesimal gap between your merged souls
Will the sobbing voices of trepidation in your head ever cease to haunt you?
You can’t see me; you don’t know me; you never will
Without a shadow of a doubt
heart
- by Panic Pirate |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: Doubt
- Artist: Panic Pirate
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Description:
This was a school poetry assignment (Title: "Doubt" Length: 16 lines)
My best friend liked it a lot (and she's totally the kind of person that would tell me if it was crap!)
so I thought I may as well post it up here :)
Thanks for any *fingers crossed* feedback! - Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: doubt love reverie anguish life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sunafire - 04/12/2009
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My interpretation is someone looking to find themself, they feel lost and meaningless and want to find the answer, they can't even find it in love.
But anyway your friend is right, this is amazing smile
First 5 rating i've been able to give in a while and a nice fave I can add to my collection biggrin
Breathtaking.
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- Panic Pirate - 04/12/2009
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Thanks for reading!
Please post your interpretations of this; I know it can be read in so many different ways. I'll post the way I wrote it (i.e. my interpretation) later on.
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