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Knight:
To the young dame who once wrote,
"I love you without a second thought"
Here's my reply to you out of the blue,
"Fair-skinned maiden is this true?"
Maiden:
"Yes it's true o noble knight,
You are the one who gave me light,
And saved me from the dimming night
So now I see the world as bright."
Knight:
"How pleased I am to hear from you
That I have changed a lot of you
All I want is for me to view
My lovely maiden, I love you too!"
Maiden:
"If you love me, come with me
To the land where we'll be free.
There we will drink a cup of tea
While sitting on the top of a tree."
Knight:
"How I wish to come with my love
But I must depart like a flying dove
I still have an enemy that I must vanquish
Would you wait for me until it's finished?"
Maiden:
"Oh I will wait, for you I will wait
For I am sure it will not be too late
Come back to me for I will open my gate
Ready to receive you, and always be great "
Knight:
"For sure I will come back with my life
To you I promise to survive this strife
I will never fail you for my soul will burn
Until we meet again when I return..."

- Title: Passionate Medieval Love
- Artist: Archille
- Description: A young maiden fell in love with a noble knight. One day the king's army was given a mission to defeat the threatening barbarians in the south of the kingdom. The knight told the maiden that he must go. This is the conversation of the two lovers tragically torn apart by war.
- Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: love epic maiden knight promise
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Comments (7 Comments)
- isabutt - 02/22/2009
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really great work:'} !
I'm glad I read this. It's sweet and manly for lack of a better word.
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- nethXsasori - 02/22/2009
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As flawless as always, as expected from an excellent writer.
A perfect blending of drama and perfection.
This work did not fail to give a medieval "feeling".
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- gracie021 - 02/22/2009
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nice one =D
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- MercyRabbit - 02/22/2009
- great work!!!5/5
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- Archille - 02/22/2009
- Thanks suika!!! To all the viewers, please feel free to drop comments. Rate my work guys and have a nice day. thank you all!=)
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- suika_krungie - 02/22/2009
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once again Archille, you've done it again.
Great work! ahaha. Keep up the good work. ^^
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