Her...

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: this is too my future wife... though i'm probobly never gonna meet her, much less make a good enough impression when I do.
• Date: 02/04/2009
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She's positive,
somewhat athletic.
She's a little clumsy,
but not at all pathetic.

She can brighten up a day,
and soften a heart.
And when she is determined,
nothing can tear her apart.

A little naive,
and daydreams a lot.
She is brilliant as well,
her records don't show a dot!

She is kind and patient,
she could settle for half.
She loves her friends,
and always likes a good laugh.

Squeamish to blood,
doesn't like pain.
She would rather laugh,
and play in the rain.

She's on fire for God,
a good Christian at heart.
When it's her and God,
nothing can tear them apart.

She is a beautiful soul,
a perfect dove.
I don't even know her,
but she is the one that I love.

Comments

[Buttercup Veela]

OH MY GOD! if u think that u won't meet ur perfect woman then ur wrong because the person u just described in that poem sounds like someone that would love the type of poetry u write. the fact that millions of ppl use gaia makes it all the more inevitable! trust me, i know this sounds really cliche, but true love does actually exist. i would know.

[xxmellymelz09xx]

i love it , i love ur poetry! (i swear i posted this comment up on this poem like 20 times lol and wont stay! grr)

[bmw12345673]

wow i say u did better no WAY better than i ever can or could 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/1 that is how much i like no LOVE IT

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i like it! i like ur ideas! u should think positive! i think u will meet her and when u do im sure ur impression will b perfect! i love it! wonderfully writen and all!

[xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx]

this isn't crap. i like it a lot. good job my friend!

[XxScarletxLiesxX]

nice job its one of the things that ppl hate others for having an idea of what they want so keep that idea and hopefully u'll find her and make a good enough impression smile

[xXI Thor IXx]

its beautiful =] far better than anything i could ever produce, and im sure when you do meet her you'll make the perfect impression =]