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God of War
I phone a friend,
That lives ten miles away.
He phones his family,
Ten thousand miles away.
I email photos of myself,
With a haircut and new clothes.
He emails me a photo,
With hair and uniform in the desert wind that blows.
I spend a dollar-eighty,
For a ten minute phone call.
He spends up to a week,
For a ten minute call.
I complain about the food,
To buy, what a pain it is.
He complains about the food,
How dry and plain it is.
I wake up at 6:00am,
To walk a mile to school.
He wakes up at 11:00pm,
To run around the motor pool.
I complain about the 60 degree weather,
Sitting under the shady noon.
He complains about the 110 degree weather,
Sitting in the middle of the dunes.
I scream at the monitor,
As I get killed in God of War.
He screams at the man in front,
Who got killed in the fog of war.
© by Daniel Graham a.k.a. Kage Klaxon and Gay Pinky Boi
- by Gay_Angel_Love |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/27/2009 |
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- Title: God of War...
- Artist: Gay_Angel_Love
- Description: I wrote this in honor of my dad who has been serving in Iraq since July of 08. I hope you like it. Good, non-noobish feeback is always welcome! Please don't say things like "It's bad" or "i hate it" ect... ok......so you don't like it. Just tell me what it is about it you don't like. Thanks!
- Date: 01/27/2009
- Tags: poetry deep patriotic military iraq
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Reno Redonkulous - 01/27/2009
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i luffs its<3^^
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- -I- leons teddy -i- - 01/27/2009
- hmmm i like it ^ ^ it sounds interesting
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