my reality

• Artist: ksamjr0036
• Description: i just wrote it, its my first entry ever in the arenas, if you dont like it thats fine. and if ur looking for happy and uplifting, this is not a piece for you. comment and rate, i dont get feedback on my work very often
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: reality

Darkness and sorrow abound and i'm swallowed by a sea of emotions. Remembering back to the times when things were simple, those days long past and missed.
I search in the darknes for my way, a light, and anchor, as i stand alone in a sea of company, empty...
I think of her, the beacon in the night, and may see my path in the darkness
I struggle to reach her, amidst all obsticles, and fall to the ground, cut down by the logic which is my own.
I lay in agony, at the reality which is mine, sitting in my room alone.

Comments

[XxxBananasxxX]

awesome

[LunaleeGriffith]

great writing ^.^ u always seem to write like that~
still it's really cool :] I'm impressed 3nodding
*goes to give u 5/5* ^w^

[Watashi wa Tsuki-desu]

hey i like it!! nice nice ^ 3 ^ 5/5

[Illiriana]

It's very nice Ksam. My only problem with it is no capitalization. But I'm picky like that. Otherwise, keep up the good work. =)

[Rayne Bloodstone]

=^.^= Hope you do well. Good Luck!!