My special ability

• Artist: Grand Shadow Wolf
• Description: some more of my famous poetry yay :) any way if you would like some ask and well discuss prices
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: special ability

i have a special power
that i am lucky to keep
i treat it as a flower
yet tears it can make me seep

this is a very great gift
a real great ability
it can open up new rifts
i have the power to SEE

Comments

[Lostt Eviie]

pretty good, but the rhyme kind of lowers it. the word choice is good and everything. i don't get the "yet tears it can make me seep" part. Short but good!

[Grand Shadow Wolf]

i think it was wonderful great rhyme scheme and good flow 5/5 lol