Ripped from the Pages

• Artist: IDK my BFF Voldie
• Description: The title is supposed to be Ripped from the Pages (Or Maybe My Chest) but apparently there's a limit on title length...
  Anyway, to the description. It's just a poem I wrote after someone dumped me. The end.
  
  And I truly hope that you don't dismiss this as "just another emo poem." Also, if you're going to critique, then be constructive with it please?
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: ripped from pages

Here.
Have my paper heart.
It was always yours
Anyway.
Take it,
Do what you want
with it.
I don't want it anymore.
It's old,
Tear-stained, it's lost
Its glamor.
Keep it in a box
Or tack it up
On your wall
To remind you what
I gave to you
But you
Never returned.

Comments

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

I always have this habit of pausing on line breaks, especially when they're capitalized. Maybe I just don't know how to read poetry.

[kyuketsuki20]

Its short, to the point, and its understandable. I liked it.