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The angel from hell,
Is one I know well,
He makes you think he loves you,
And wears your soul like a shoe,
And then when he's through,
When he's through with you're soul and you,
He tells you he needs something new,
Then collects you're soul,
And all he leaves is a little hole,
Then the angel from heaven takes the hole,
And fills it with love and care,
Leaving this angel is something you do not dare,
But my angel from heaven is a different one,
Its not that he will never be done,
But its that im not his "one".
So you should know something about you're angel from heaven,
You might not be his angel from heaven,
But as long as my angel from heaven never leaves my side,
I think ill stick along for the ride whee

- Title: The Angels
- Artist: Jenna894
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Description:
its one of my 1st poems and like my songs, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISIZM
also i have an angel from heaven and hell of my own.. - Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: angel love hell
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Comments (3 Comments)
- scooder_1 - 11/28/2008
- great poem!! i see what u're saying. i liked it. unlike the other people, i'm not going to insult ure grammor. i has to work on it mysef. AWESOME!!
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- undefined reaper - 11/28/2008
- niiiice....touching but spelling errors
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- Clintorus Eastwood - 11/28/2008
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I like how it all rhymes, I haven't many poems that rhyme...
Just to let you know, there are a bunch of spelling and grammar errors.
Also, it is all good, but next time, if you have Microsoft word, or a journal application, put your work in there and it will clear it up for you. 10/5!! - Report As Spam