"The Earth"

• Artist: iResell
• Description: A poem I wrote..I appreciate comments...I would love constructive criticism also ...to help with my future poems!
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: earth

The Earth has allowed us to live our lives
Now it watches displeased, and cries
It blows each wind crying out
Hoping we'll hear it's subtle shout

All the things we took for granted
Cutting trees we should have planted
The infinite thought of our resources
Now is ending in many courses

Now our world is sinking down
Slipping under, yet refusing to drown
Soon the water will atop earths head
We will finally see what we've done

And why we are dead.

Comments

[_xkimono-tarax_]

thats a really good poem.
i really liked it^^

[rich milk chocolate]

u r good at writing poems. i wish i cud be that good at it

[CuttleTheFish]

that is sooo good i can not write like that i wish i could

[xOathkeeper_and_Oblivionx]

very interesting, and i enjoyed reading it.

[SmileZombiiie]

i loved it
and i believe its true
we're destroying the earth
and its killing us
and its true!
people need to learn
to fix what they have done
xD i hope that means what i trying to say
sometimes im not very clear ^^''
anyways great poem 5/5
and i write poems too
so i feel i know what im talking about
=]

[SogniDeAnima]

um, i think i get it...kinda obvious 2 me, we should respect the earth and not kill ourselves destroying it (?) anyway, 5

[iResell]

I completely disagree...lol ...that makes no sense. I guess you don't get the poem.