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Twas her eyes that lit the sun aflame
Once thee set eyes upon her, you shall never be the same
Tis her smile that makes the stars seem dull
Aphrodite herself covers herself in shadows full
Her warmth keeps the hearts of many inspired
By many her beauty is admired
Yet this strange feeling, tis not one thy can describe...
Not one that can be known to a priest nor a scribe
But only to a poet this majik of hers should appear
Only the finest product of God, can one hold so dear
There tis nothing more pure, than to see her face full of glee
Then truely you will know, what it means to be free.
- by Spader Beledineigh |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MATT-ELF-REAPER - 09/04/2008
- pretty good dude i like the words u used and the words u used to ryheme plz coment back plz go to poetry and plz type in stared if u do thnx's
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- BlackDraconian - 09/04/2008
- wow, I love it!
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- Jahanara0707 - 08/07/2008
- I really like it. smile
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- aimike3 - 08/02/2008
- excellent! 5/5.
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- TUK Jasmine Rain - 08/02/2008
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Told ya what i think xD.....
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- Wolfy-kuns - 07/31/2008
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Hai! A friend of Furry's! ^____________________^
This is a beautiful piece... I love all the metaphors in it...
Well, as I normally say, keep writing! ^_______^ - Report As Spam