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Quiet, my child.
No tears will heal your broken heart;
no cries will heal what's been torn apart.
Talk to me.
I'm here to listen to your pain.
Wait--hush and listen to the pouring rain.
It cries for you.
Just hold my hand and we'll make it through.
Just hug me; I'll see what I can do.
I'm here.
Trust me enough to talk to me, to explain.
Just hold my hand, and listen to the rain.
- Title: Listen to the Rain
- Artist: mq90x9p
- Description: I just wrote this poem recently. I hope you enjoy, and please tell me what you think! :)
- Date: 07/28/2008
- Tags: rain brokenheart mq90x9p cries
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sarevo - 09/13/2008
- As I speak, my eyes are teary. Who knew such a short poem could be so long in someone's mind. I loved it.
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- 0Nerine0 - 09/13/2008
- very soothing
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- ShikuLunei - 09/11/2008
- Lovely. : )
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- bluebird94 - 09/05/2008
- real nice. quite comforting.............me like.
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- evil_dr_monkmonk - 07/30/2008
- beautiful
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- magikhawk - 07/30/2008
- very pretty beffa, strong and beautiful.
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- weezieishness - 07/29/2008
- It has a really comforting feel about it, it's nice. Keep it up! Oh, and please read my poem, it's called The River.
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