"The Earth"

• Artist: iResell
• Description: A poem I wrote..I appreciate comments...I would love constructive criticism also ...to help with my future poems!
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: earth

The Earth has allowed us to live our lives
Now it watches displeased, and cries
It blows each wind crying out
Hoping we'll hear it's subtle shout

All the things we took for granted
Cutting trees we should have planted
The infinite thought of our resources
Now is ending in many courses

Now our world is sinking down
Slipping under, yet refusing to drown
Soon the water will atop earths head
We will finally see what we've done

And why we are dead.

Comments

[IICARRIONII]

WHOA THATS ******** AWESOME

[PeachPride21]

so true, people only learn after if it's to late

[x-Devia Animus-x]

Wow this is really good,and true.The human race is destroying the Earth and most just aren't bothering to care until it's too late.

[Aquaa Dots]

WOA! Good job fellow GaGer!

[Insane Reader]

Whoa love the deep meaning in here and i understand the message, you have a new fan

[l lawliet lind tailer]

thats really good!