My Best Friend

• Artist: Dark_Clark17
• Description: I wrote this peom for my best friend as u see, and well yea its how i feel :p
• Date: 10/23/2008
• Tags: best friend

Your My Best Friend
you surely make my heart bend
You sit and listen to me as i cry
While i stop to think and try
When everything seems frail
You come to save the day
As my heart is lost in a stray

My friend that i care so fondly of
Is certainly the person that i cant stop thinking of
As my life slowly fades away
You always come and make me stay
As your words leave your mouth
They surely pierce my heart
It feels like a flying dart

My life revolves around your words
That sing to me as musical cords
Your words slowly touch
As i can feel this rush
That make's my heart Blush
If i could say how i feel
I would say how our love is real

As i close my eyes and wonder
and i fall into a deep slumber
I feel you next to me
whispering to me
how much You care
wondering myself if i should dare
My heart pounding for you
As I tell you I Love You

Comments

[Beyond A Rebel]

wow i love it ts great 5/5
please read my poem called love and comment

[Ode-Melody]

All poetry needs punctuation. It makes it easier to read. At least you use feminine end rhyme unlike many of the other 'wannabe' poets in this contest. As for content, the poem is very cliche. As for keeping up with your own format, it's a bit of a fail... You rhyme sometimes and other times you don't - it ruins the flow of the poem. At least your friend must be happy.

[Fairest93]

awww wow that is really sweet. i just recently told my friend how i felt about them and this is how it felt. it turned out they felt the same way ^.^ but keep writing it is excellent. i love it.

[Lady Calipso]

omg... T.T

[Crycho]

thats cute ^^

[Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX]

cool =] 5/5 ^_^

[Dark_Clark17]

Ty ^^ im glad you like it