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my world is cold
eveything a lie
am i nothing in ur eyes???
seeing the truth that was nothing but lies
having been hurt
my heart has shattered
my life has died
i lost all hope
living was a lie
till the day i died
now there is nothing left to go by
nothing
now this is good-bye
hope to eye u on the other side
- by unknow virus sis |
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- | Submitted on 07/04/2009 |
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- Title: living lies
- Artist: unknow virus sis
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Description:
a girl that feel that life sucks and hopes to find something better on the other side of the raindow
i got board so dont think im emo or depressed or sucidal IM NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Date: 07/04/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iContacreast - 07/20/2009
- LOVE IT :3 and i love you too keep writing them
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- I x I- S i n - 07/10/2009
- 5/5
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- jessman90 - 07/09/2009
- great poem bravo 5/5
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- vv7722 - 07/08/2009
- Yeah I agree you should use better form, because this is really great. i can really relate it with my own life because im depressed and suicidal smile anyway loved it smile
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- Meli Milk - 07/08/2009
- I love it. You are really good so put it in better form. Don't use chat speak and caps the first letter of each line because this is a really really nice poem. Oh and you only need one ? mark. wink
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- smiley peyton - 07/06/2009
- gosh tht was really good...i never would have been able to think of anything tht good....tht was kinda deep 2.....well to sum it up....I LOVED IT, SISTER U ROCK!!!!!!,AND KEEP ON WRITING
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