~missing you~

• Artist: twilight 2night
• Description: This is about a person very special to me and i hope u enjoy it.......
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: missing

The day you first meet me was the day we were filled with happyness
The day you first held me i was bouncing from your grasp with joy
The day you first kissed me was the the day i could and would not frown
The day you first said you loved me was the happiest day of my life
The day we first woke up in each other arms was the most unruinable day of my life
The day you left me was the worst day of my life i cryed for hours and still have a scar on my heart
The day you said you would return leaves me still here missing you

Comments

[Rook219]

one typo XD but who doesn't make 'em?
Well, 50/5!

[La Ribon]

really good =]
Just some typos in the poem but i give you a 5/5

[twilight 2night]

i just wanted to let yall know i semited another poem and i hope yall will read and tell me what yall think of it also and thankz again for the comments and votez

[better off without u]

Very cute... Beautifully made. I can feel all the emotions that are supposed to be felt from reading this.

[X_Mahlyenki_Dyavol_X]

I love your work. I can feel the emotion you put into your poem...I gave you a four on accident...It was suppose to be a five...Heh...Check out some of my work?

[twilight 2night]

ty yall for the comments and votez and ty wifey but thats allright x3

[Felicia_Monsterr]

this poem is REALLY REALLY good, and i can feel the pain in this, that kind of thing has happened to me before. sad ... but this is a really beautiful poem. keep writing