Darkness and Fate

• Artist: SS2-SITH LORD
• Description: I wrote this with death in mind. I wanted to describe how we all have fears and they sometimes come in form of dreams. But fear is a reality.
• Date: 08/11/2010
• Tags: darkness fate

I awake from my dream
to a knock on my bedroom door.
I get up out of bed.
My feet touch the cold floor.

I travel across my bedroom.
And reach for the door handle.
And I open the door,
Then my thoughts are all scrambled.

There is nothing there.
Only darkness within.
A world of emptiness.
Surely full of sin.

Something compels me
To take a step inside.
I give into the feeling
Giving up hope and pride.

As I walk further in darkness
I see a mirror up ahead.
I walk up to the crystal slate
And what I see strikes me dead.

It's something that I've known of
But always tried to hide.
Something I've tried hard
To bury deep inside.

Lying to myself
I said "This is not real".
A Voice from the darkness laughed
And my bones turned to steel.

I ran back to the door
And reached for the knob.
It wouldn't budge.
The Evil's done his job.

I suddenly started to fall.
The air rushed at my face.
My world started to reappear.
My bed, blankets, and pillow case.

It was all a dream.
But was it really?
I can still hear the laugh.
It was so bone chilling!

Comments

[WOOTISH]

It's alright, I think you could be a little bit more elaborate.
But overall, I enjoyed it.

[a trollop]

i looked at it and all i could think was
tl;dr

[KingBet]

It's a great poem.
although I have a feeling like it doesn't explain much.
I have this curiosity to learn more.
maybe you should think about extending it, but great job none the less wink

[Midget Spice]

I actually read it and liked it. The flow needs a little work but it was really cool. 4/5 :].

[Liane-Chan]

looks great! Truly a work of art eh? ^_^

[Lucelle Vondare]

That's very amazing :3~
And so true!

[T i c k l e M e P e d o]

Interesting. It hooked me, so I kept reading. I like it! <3