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I saw you walk in in a short black skirt with fishnets underneath
and I wanted to know you.I wanted to meet the girl in the the perwinkle and white eyeshadow.The girl with the cat eyes.To me you were perfect.You had everything all figured out.So I followed you into the women's restroom at the mexican food place and talked.I talked to you while we were in line in that bathroom with one stall and one sink.And though it was probably just three minutes of conversation it felt like an hour.A well-spent hour...you want to be a make-up artist,your in your last year of college,you don't like paramore but your a big fan of no-doubt.You knew who you were.Where you were going.You had it all figured out...and besides all that you were pretty cute.
Before I walked out the bathroom I told you i wasn't a stalker,though i didn't really have to pee.I honestly just wanted to talked to you.Your since of identity and your cat eyes were intriguing....
- by trix_intrepid |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/26/2009 |
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- Title: Cat Eyes
- Artist: trix_intrepid
- Description: Mexican food!
- Date: 04/26/2009
- Tags: eyes
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xionfairy - 09/25/2009
- love it smile quite good
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- Doomboo - 09/12/2009
- HAHAHA! I didn't really have to pee!!!
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- ProfessorKC - 09/03/2009
- A bit creepy ... just a bit. If you have to tell someone you aren't a stalker then just maybe ...
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- ElStupido - 08/29/2009
- your story is also intriguing. that's why it makes you want to read all of it, just like the girl makes you want to know more about her. i like it
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- Indie Jesus - 08/25/2009
- I like it. I dont think the grammatical errors deter from the story at all I understood it perfectly and I know the feeling. :]
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- Jinx_you_owe_me_a_shark - 08/18/2009
- I liked it. a few things stuck out though. you didn't put a space after periods or commas, and you didn't use the correct form of the word "you're." other than that it was interesting ^_~
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- o-Hoshi-chan-o - 08/07/2009
- I don't see why it doesn't make a lot of sense :S. Actually it makes.. its just a description of a boy that saw a girl that caught his attention, whats weird on that? maybe it has not an ending, but who says it has to? improving language wouldnt be a bad idea tough (:
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