Let me Wish

• Artist: azmarian_lee
• Description: dis is my poem and i am so inspired while writing this.. this is for people who are inlove and determine to be with there love.. well nothing is impossible like "loving the wrong person but it feels so right.. (=^_^=)
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: wish

I wish this poem were pixie dust
To throw into your eyes
And make you see the loveliness
Beneath my sad disguise.

And I would take you in my arms
And weave a magic spell
That I could utter anytime
To make you love me well.

But alas my simple words
Are like summer rain
That drums on hills and fields and hearts,
Then vanishes again.

And though my love might make you bloom,
You turn with fragile grace
To gaze in aching loneliness
At someone else's face.

We lust for what we cannot have,
A long, unbroken chain
Of lovers who remain unloved
And loved who love in vain.

While I'm near mad with wanting you
As trees must have the sun,
You cannot help but find a love
Who loves another one.

Comments

[iiBubblez_x]

very beautiful! i rlly luv it!

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

Hm. I dunno, this whole poem just seems a bit weak. It's not bad, don't get me wrong. I'm really bad at commenting on mid range poetry, since I'm not particularly poetic myself, but I like reading them regardless. Mostly I troll the awful stuff, to be honest... So, uh, I really need to take a poetry course XD.

[mae_odracir]

u rock!!! so meaningful.. lyk it so much

[koreancutie2]

its beautiful!! i luv it!!

[xXCuddlie_Yet_ViciousXx]

omg. i love it! ur style is amazing smile

[darkangel9194]

This is by far the best poem that I've ever read in the arenas. I really hat that the voting ony goes up to 5 because this is definetly a 10.

[The Darke Assassin]

I really liked this one. It makes me think of the reason I wrote the poem I did. I gave this a 5/5. My poem is "The Crush" If you would please rate back and comment I would appreciate it.