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Toasted inside-out
The cheers get diminished by
Spurs racing feverishly on silhouettes
With this worn-out fall
I boast about my homecoming decision
Detected I've risen out of
My seamless prison held tightly
In these trembling fists
They cannot feel the dew
The serpent lied
With my forces dwindling for no reason
I crack and lose edifices
I'd say that the spindles should
Get behind and pierce the flask
And there's no resisting of the temptation
Pictured by the saddest night
So then I run to Orion's prison
And weave what may save me from you
The light reaches my toes
I must get up but my will is
Diminished by unwanted silhouettes
In my own words, you'll become something
But that's like wearing those silhouettes
Detected I've risen out of
Your dreamless prison held tightly
Within your pessimist's plague
It cannot call on the dew
The serpent lied
With my forces dwindling for no reason
I break and lose relevant pieces
I'd say that the spindles should
Get behind and finish the task
And there's no resisting of the temptation
Pictured by the dullest night
So then I run to Orion's prison
And weave what may save me from you
The serpent lied
So then I run to Orion's prison
If that's what you'll boast as your decision
As I weave what may save me from you
- by Sapphire Rune |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: #681: Orion
- Artist: Sapphire Rune
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Description:
I apologize if my style is too obscure for those who want messages to be straightforward, But, hey! This is my style and I'm proud of it. Being heavily laced with metaphors, it's open to all kinds of interpretations.
But I hope it touches you guys on a certain level since this is about warding off a feeling for somebody who has done you harm and you don't want to be with anymore. - Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LivingDeadRomance - 07/19/2008
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5/5 po ^^ good luck........ biggrin - Report As Spam
- butt crumbs - 07/19/2008
- Now this is good. None of that "I'll draw a picture on my wrist with a razor" bullshit. 5/5
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- CheshireDaydreams - 07/19/2008
- Wow. I can seriously relate to that. I likes it! 5/5!!!
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- Sapphire Rune - 07/19/2008
- Thanks!~
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- Spirit-senpai Albarn - 07/19/2008
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I love it very much.
5 stars.
The metaphors are killer. - Report As Spam
- Sapphire Rune - 07/19/2008
- Thank you so much Lane Ashtrid!
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- Lane Ashtrid - 07/19/2008
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5
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