My Heart Aches For Love

• Artist: Amazon_Chik
• Description: Just a poem I wrote for english class.. I really don't know where I found my inspiration? XP
  Hopefully you enjoy it as much I enjoyed writing it.
  Leave comments, I want some feedback.. >_< I sort of my first or second poem written in english! 8D
• Date: 04/29/2010
• Tags: heart aches love

I will never shed a tear
whenever you are near
because that will show my fear
that I want you just right here.

My heart is not a toy,
but I'm still falling for you, my boy.
I cannot explain this feeling
when my heart starts beating.

Love is hard to find.
I don't need a boy to feel fine,
but I really wish you were mine,
so I can finally show a smile
and maybe walk through the aisle.

Comments

[Aboobination]

@SadistCake: Ohh yeahh I know
Since english is my second language, I can only make poems with easy words.. xD but thanks! =) I'll take that into account next time.

[SadistCake]

well..I normally hate rhyming poems...

But its..ok. You could improve it a bit with expanded vocabulary.

[Aboobination]

Thanks guys!! ;D

[Alice_Arisu]

tis very beautiful i only say tis when i a impressed, which is rarely

[Amazon_Chik]

@Rosie: Thanks!! If you ever post them, I'd love to read them =)
@Dsainer: 8D y eso que ya lo habias leido antes

[- Dope SheEt -]

Casi me hizo llorar. *^*

[- Dope SheEt -]

5'D
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