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Poverty is not a sin
You have to grin
So you could win
And spin, your chin.
Poverty is not a mistake
That you should take
It is a chain you break
Something you should shake.
Work hard and long
Be proud and strong
You’ll see it won’t take long
You’ll hear a new song.
It is never wrong to be poor
What’s wrong is to be unsure
Make sure to endure
Stand tall and be secure! heart
- by angelsordemons08 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/22/2009 |
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- Title: Poverty
- Artist: angelsordemons08
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Description:
poverty is not a sin.....
so vote,rate and comment it...... - Date: 03/22/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Lady GagaNYC - 05/15/2010
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Overall, Great poem. It has great meaning to it:
ADVICE: I think the ryhming is a little distracting of the poem when someone is reading it. The first three line of the last stanza is powerful - Report As Spam
- XxXMr_JizzXxX - 05/15/2010
- love it
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- kawaiigurl18 - 11/07/2009
- yay nice
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- angelsordemons08 - 08/25/2009
- tnx guys
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 08/08/2009
- poor people are bad...
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- Gummy burrs - 07/04/2009
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"and spin, your chin" ?
could of reworded it =S
but i like it anyways XD
especially the topic - Report As Spam
- 1Akuri - 04/24/2009
- nice rhyming
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