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The darkness that dwells inside,
Is the living part of me,
I’ve kept it in for so long,
So much anger never let out,
Struggled with every tantrum,
Suppressing the urge to shout,
But the turning point is now,
No longer will you hurt me,
No more pain will I feel,
This day will end my sorrows,
My emotions will flow with hatred,
Through this day of reckoning I have realized,
Revenge through success is sweet.
- by -VSF-Gaara |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/17/2009 |
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- Title: REVENGE
- Artist: -VSF-Gaara
- Description: i made this up for an avi submission so i thought id bring it here to see wat people think
- Date: 02/17/2009
- Tags: revenge
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Zekoyah - 11/19/2009
- Hate to break up the sweet comments here. I've seen this poem everywhere. The wording, emotion, and poem as a whole has been written by thousands. It's a cliche in writing. All I can say is break it down, find new and imaginative ways to express.
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- littlenv7 - 02/26/2009
- omg so emotional O_O 5
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- tksunshine93 - 02/18/2009
- "Revenge through success is sweet" Oh so true. I love this, though I must say it awoke something long dormant in me. Great flow, very powerful, I WANT MORE. Oh and bravo ^^
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- -VSF-Gaara - 02/18/2009
- **
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- -VSF-Gaara - 02/18/2009
- *kills banana*
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- -VSF-Gaara - 02/17/2009
- bumps or watever it is
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- -VSF-Gaara - 02/17/2009
- thx for that comment but i want more ;P
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