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She's positive,
somewhat athletic.
She's a little clumsy,
but not at all pathetic.
She can brighten up a day,
and soften a heart.
And when she is determined,
nothing can tear her apart.
A little naive,
and daydreams a lot.
She is brilliant as well,
her records don't show a dot!
She is kind and patient,
she could settle for half.
She loves her friends,
and always likes a good laugh.
Squeamish to blood,
doesn't like pain.
She would rather laugh,
and play in the rain.
She's on fire for God,
a good Christian at heart.
When it's her and God,
nothing can tear them apart.
She is a beautiful soul,
a perfect dove.
I don't even know her,
but she is the one that I love.
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/04/2009 |
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- Title: Her...
- Artist: 290DarkStars
- Description: this is too my future wife... though i'm probobly never gonna meet her, much less make a good enough impression when I do.
- Date: 02/04/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xRossariox - 11/29/2009
- I like it and goodluck dude biggrin I bet you'll find her
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 11/27/2009
- hmm i like it and i think you will find her eventually
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- 1so_so11rry_ari11 - 09/26/2009
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awwwww
GAH!!!!
darky ur poems make me cwy T^T its so sweet... mine could neva touch urz XP - Report As Spam
- Sings4GodsGlory - 06/20/2009
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This was beautifully written! And I wish you the best of luck on your search for your other half. =] Don't give up, she's out there, just keep praying and you'll find her.
Take care, keep writing and God bless!
~Hillary - Report As Spam
- Daddy Got This Account - 05/04/2009
- aww... so sweet. ^^ i would die if some one would dedicate something like this to me. but im happy with the drawings chewy does for me. ^^ but! over all this poem was powerful and emotional. i can tell you put a lot of heart into this poem. 5/5
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- darksangel34 - 04/24/2009
- omygod!!! this compltly describes my personality!!!! that was soooo sweet!!!! i love it! ^^ iloveitiloveitiLOVEIT!!!!!! 1100000000000000000000000000000010000000000000000000000000/5
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- Fake Silence - 04/03/2009
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Hmm... Randomly found this, and actually found out that you've been commenting on my work, but, I forgot... Hmm... That girl in the poem sounds familiar enough...
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