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my heart is like a black hole,
my heart islike a graveyard,
it's dead.
it's dark.
it's creepy.
and, it's haunted.
my heart is like a ghost,
it's completely hollow.
it's now,
almost comepletely black.
but,
most of all,
my heart is,
yours...
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- | Submitted on 01/22/2009 |
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- Title: my heart
- Artist: Daddy Got This Account
- Description: ok, well, i wrote this to explain somewhat what im feeling. ^^" please rate and comment! ^^ thank you!
- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Daddy Got This Account - 04/03/2009
- ggrrr.... dang typos.... i meant to say "old" >_<
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- Daddy Got This Account - 04/03/2009
- ^^ youre always so sweet. and this one is kinda p;d. but hey, thats ok! ^^
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- Chewy1469 - 04/03/2009
- You have a heart, and I think that its very beautiful. And good poetry always come from it. 5/5, I love you.
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- Daddy Got This Account - 04/02/2009
- ^^ mmhm, no problem! ^^
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- 290DarkStars - 04/01/2009
- I was searching for rhyme, that was meaningless. I searched for ryhtem, but i diddn't haveta. I searched for depth, and I was reminded of the deep thoughts that I think. And I searched for heart, and I noticed what a great poet that you are. 5/5! Thank you for the comment!
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- Deshi_Venshin594 - 02/18/2009
- the ending is very dramatic and well its great
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- CaucasianNoodles - 02/16/2009
- wonderful sis, *thumbs up*
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