Angel down

• Artist: Xo_MOB_ACE_oX
• Description: I wrote this not to long ago. My friend was in a car accident with a drunk driver and was killed i read this at her funeral....
  Comment please tell me what you like what you don't like
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: angel down

Isn't it weird how the best of the angels are the ones who are hurt the most
shot down by the demons, the ones who brag and boast.
evil is all they ever think and evil's all they speak
they search for the ones who are down and who are weak

Isn't it weird how the best of the kids are the ones that cry the most
took out by the rumors of those who brag and boast
gossip is all they think and gossip's all the speak
they betray the ones who are down and who are weak

Angel down
angel down
look at her walk around
nothing left but a frown.

Isn't it weird how the best of the best are one of the first to go
the darkest of the worst don't care because they will never know
sadness is all they know sadness is all they feel
always looking for away always making a big deal

Isn't it weird how you were the one that had to go
he drunk but you were the one to die so he would never know
the pain your family and your friends feel
he wonders why it is such a big deal


Angel down
angel down
she watches us walk around
nothing left of her but a frown.

Comments

[Stop Humane Society]

Yes, I too am very sorry about what happened. And just so you know this poem was amazing, it is now one of my most favorite. I too have a couple of poems. My fave of mine are Butterfly,butterfly. You should read it. Bye, hope you are doing well. 5/5

[maydaymouse]

I'm so sorry, but what you wrote is amazing. It was very emotional and read very well. 5/5

[rainbow_pretty_cakes]

Omy sissy i wuv u

[Ta-Ri-Pu-82]

wow that is very touching...

[AngeI Flonne]

I'm sorry that happened T-T It's really great. A lot more emotion, meaning and flows a lot better than mine ^^;; 10/5 Whoops , I mean 5/5 hehe ^^

[Jeyrin]

btw, you rated "Unspoken Message" which was mine. That's why I said thanks. It was posted on my mule, Nikki4815. You can check out the other stuff, too, if you like.

[Jeyrin]

It's nice. (and thx for rating me. You should see my other stuff. And PM me if you like!) I was inspired. And I really like to title, and how it was used frequently throughout the poem. Would you mind if I wrote a poem with the same name, but I completely different basis (I doubt it would be as good as yours though....)