loved one that broke togoodbye

• Artist: rocksan11
• Description: this was between me and my ex........... the pain and misurey he caused me and i only noticed it now how many times i had cried and had sleep less nights
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: broke lovedone

he asked me what was wrong
i smiled and turned away
he gave me a hug
as i went my way and he went his
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this smile turned to
these tears strem down my face
for i knew i wont ever be the same
i walked out the door
there he is awaiting
the heart shadering words
just came
my heart stopped
my stomach twisted
the smile sank from my face
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these eyes of mine became blury
i wish i would not have gone to the door
i dropped to the floor
in disbelife
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these tears i cry now
that shouldent be
i could not have changed it
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to him i say i am sorry for the misurey you caused and every second i waset belifeing that i was the only one
that special some one
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but to take one last hug
say good bye
he asked me what was wrong
i smiled and turned away
but when i turned away i wispered every thing
but you dont care.......................
enough to notice.........................................

Comments

[SmileCute12]

its no problem
take a look at mine if u get the chance and comment plz <33

[Alibis of the Heart]

It's very good. The transitions of love to heart break flow.
If, you don't mind, would you take a look at my poems?

[Epoa]

This is very, very sad. It sounds like you are going through some hard times. Grand poem.

[rocksan11]

thanks all for commenting i apreasiate it so much

[SmileCute12]

you have talent
that poem makes you feel and see all at once
truely heartbreaking

[The Darke Assassin]

That is truely sad. I have been there before. His parents though yelled at him for what he did to me. They really liked me. So I got some joy out of the situation, I was the gf his mother has ever hugged, still to this day.