Pretending She Is Not There

• Artist: Matsuri_OnePiece
• Description: Sitting there, watching your back
  You'r ignoring, pretending i'm not there
  Always watching your steps.
  Seeing you'r laughing, feeling like hell.
  I want your laugh.. smile for me too
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: pretending here

Sitting there, watching your back
You'r ignoring, pretending i'm not there
Always watching your steps.
Seeing you'r laughing, feeling like hell.
I want your laugh.. smile for me too.

Waiting for you to notice, to see
I'm standing right here but still,
It doesn't seem like you noticed, like you saw.
I want you to see. to feel my existence.
To laugh with me, to smile your special smile.
To look with your deeply eyes.
To feel the warmth of your hand..

But still.. you can't see me with those eyes
Still, you won't laugh for me with your special smile.
Still, i won't feel your warmth, or look.
But i'll always be there, sitting in the back. watching you.
'Cause no metter what, you can't see me

As always.
Pretending i'm not there.

~~~~~~~~
V.M. ;]

Comments

[charlotte_loves]

Eeeh...I don't really like this poem,Not to be a critic.Its lovely,i mean..But,Its not..really..a poem. 2/5

[xSunshinexBabyx]

This relates alot to me right now..
Its a really good poem, 5/5

[un3dead3spirit3]

i know what your going through if this was written based on how your feeling right now, good poem. 5/5

[wolf_brat11]

Ignore those comments who don't like it. you wrote a good poem and as long as you like it then it's perfect.

[Matsuri_OnePiece]

hu.. um i see i see -0.0-.. thanx for the comments i'll try to do better next time hehe :]