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you tell me your through,
you say your done,
and i try to convince you,
it's only just begun.
you say you can't take it,
that there's nothing left,
i try to remind you,
to take a deep breath.
you say you are unloved,
just cause he won't need you,
i try to assure you,
he can't live without you.
you tell me it's over,
that your last dream has gone,
i try to get you,
to dream up another one.
you say you found an escape,
a way to break free
now i am begging you
to please not leave me.
you bring up the blade,
and you look up to the sky,
beg heaven your soul to take,
beg the pain to go when you fly.
you say your last word,
say it has only begun,
but what you don't realize,
for me, it's done.
- by rabid marshmallow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/16/2008 |
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- Title: your escape.
- Artist: rabid marshmallow
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Description:
i don't know, i just made up a title i don't actally have one but anywhoo...
this SORT OF relates to me but not entirely.
i don't normally write the sad and dark type of poems but this one just sort of came to me at a moments noticed. hope it's okay! - Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: your escape
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XxX_trinidy_XxX - 11/17/2008
- great job it made me think.
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- Temptingfate - 11/17/2008
- I though the way you flipped the ryhme of "done" and "begun" in the first and last stanza was very clever. An amazing and heartfelt poem.
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- miwa_hikari - 11/17/2008
- It shook me inside.
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- Frederic Senpai - 11/17/2008
- I really love it...
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- Maryjustianna - 11/16/2008
- oh my gosh thats such a good poem! they are way better than mine! 5/5
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- Ueto Ara - 11/16/2008
- Its nice im LOOOOOVE it soooooooo MUCH!!!!
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- jazzyjjlljjj - 11/16/2008
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wowo pretty good.
and sad - Report As Spam