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The Dreamer’s Hell
“Look at that place mom!” I exclaimed. “We should go and see what
it looks like inside.” My mother with her medium length brown hair and
chocolate colored eyes scanned the ancient, ivy immersed, stone mansion
with its red flaming torches by the dirt filled and scratched marble
staircase. Meanwhile it was lit up in the soundless lightning that was
zigzagging across the coal colored sky, never giving us a warning to when
we would be blinded. She then looked at me as if I belonged in an asylum
for the mentally insane. However, my sister, Samantha, with her dirty
blonde hair and shimmering green eyes, looked awed at the towering castle
crumbling slowly before our eyes and ran as fast as a doe spooked by a gun
going off, but with excitement spreading all over her face. Before she could
open the faded maple wood doors open, a blind, skinny woman with raven
black hair, laughing baby blue eyes, garbed in a red Victorian styled gown
with pearls at the base of her gazelle like neck and black satin high heels
torturing her small feet making them look sore, opened up the bulky doors.
Once she opened them, she sang out with giddiness of a child that
made me feel uneasy, “Hello! I am your tour guide today, my name is
Cherry Poplar! I am so excited to tell you about this historically rich
manor! Please, come in so we can start!” We came inside and I immediately
noticed that there were stone gargoyles whose faces were starting to fade
away. However, they were strategically placed so that I felt like they were
all staring at me, consequently, making me feel extremely unwelcome inside
of the Victorian house, but gone unnoticed by both my mother and
Sami. While we were walking and barley listening to Cherry as she told us
the rich history of the manor down the constricted passage.
Pigeons, ravens, and owls of all shapes, sizes, and colors flew closer and
closer to us as if they were screaming. “ Get out, before it’s too late for all of
you.” We kept walking through the narrow hallway, filled with ripped,
faded and dusty furniture from the Victorian time period that was mostly
dark, and red with skinny gold stripes. Then, we got shorter and smaller
until we got to two hallways intersecting each other.
“Where’s Cherry?” Sami squeaked.
“I don’t know.” Mom squeaked puzzlingly. “Maybe she got sick of
being in those high heels and decided to take them off.”
“Where do you think she is now?” Sami whispered as we slowly grew
back to our normal height and Mom seemed to grow smaller.
“She’s probably putting some ice on her extremely sore looking feet.”
I assumed.
“Where’s Mom?” Sami fearfully asked when we were at our normal
height.
“I don’t know, maybe she went to find Cherry, even though she’s
annoying.” I growled.
“I thought she was nice.” She sorrowfully mumbled. Then, It blacked
out as if the electricity wires were finally finished and eaten through by
The small rodents infesting it over the years.
“Brit,” Sami growled, I need to go to the bathroom.”
“Can’t you hold it until its light enough to see where it is?” I
frustratingly asked while tapping my foot rapidly.
“I can try, but there’s no guarantees!” She angrily implied with a loud
wine. Luckily, when it became light enough to see, we were right next to a
bathroom marked in black Sharpie, Girls. I opened up the creaky, pinewood
door and let her find a stall as I walked in front of her to go and sit down in
a cobweb and dust filled corner. Once I sat down, I noticed a whirlwind of
cold air going in a invisible counterclockwise circle in front of me, but
never moving anywhere else. Intrigued, I took out a small peacock feather
out of my dark washed jeans` right pocket and twirled it, watching it slowly disappear like it was going into an invisible portal to transport to another
place and time.
All of a sudden, I started spinning, stopped blinking, rolled my eyes
So only the whites showed, and kept on getting faster until I had an out-of-
Body experience. Seeing myself with rolled eyes and still crazily spinning, I
spotted a woman to the right of where the whirlwind of freezing air was
coming from. She was transparent, but you could tell she was ghostly pale.
However, she had reddish black eyes that weren’t transparent and had a
fearful, but sorrowful look to them. She was clad in a Victorian styled high
collared white dress that had lace as it’s high collar, held up by two small
pearl buttons to keep it close to her giraffe-like neck. Her Victorian look
was complete with a diamond chocker, diamond bracelet, and a diamond
ring that was glued on her left hand. Sami finally came out of her stall and
started to scream with fear at seeing me wildly spin with my eyes stilled
rolled back, but didn’t notice the woman diagonal to me.
Finally, I woke with a start, with beads of sweats running down my
face. I relaxed, sighed with relief, then closed my eyes to go back to my
dream world, waiting for surprises to jump at any second, ready to immerge
back to reality, ready to wake up.
- by Mage Kirara Crystal |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/09/2010 |
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- Title: Dreamer`s Hell
- Artist: Mage Kirara Crystal
- Description: based on yet another of my dreams, this was acutually my weirdest one yet.
- Date: 08/09/2010
- Tags: dreamers hell dream nightmare
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- Mage Kirara Crystal - 08/08/2011
- then what would you call it??? f
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- Rabbitron - 10/03/2010
- Dreams do not constitute non fiction.
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