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Part One.
Once there was a boy named Nathan. He about 19 years old, had green eyes
pale skin, and long jet black hair. Nathan's amnitions where to meet with
his realy parents. He was rasied in a number of diffrent foster families
as he grew up. He was a quite guy, He loved to help anyone in need and
enjoyed seening people happy. Nathan was really never happy about any-
thing. He loved and cherished very much his little sister named Kayla
she was 9 years old. She was very skiny, laugthed a lot, and she had very
pretty rosey pink cheeks.
Once day, Nathan and her walked in the nigth back from the park. "ohh!
today was really fun bubbie! Can we got back tomarrow!?" Kayla asked nathan
every exited. Nathan just nodded, "I guess sissy, Mabye if you help me clean
up when we get home." As they both walked a man from the other side of the street.
He slowly then crossed over to the other side of the street where Kayla and Nathan
where at. "It be best if you kids get home quitely." said the mysterious man. Nathan
just looked at him "alrigth..." responded nathan.
It was about nine thirthy when they got home. Kayla ran to her room happily while nathan
walked over to the kitchen and begun washing the dishes "NATHAN! THERES A MAN THATS
TRYING TO HURT ME" Screamed kayla snobbing. Nathan got very mad. "KAYLA STOP
PLAYING AROUND, IM NOT IN THE MOOD, COME AND HELP ME WITH THE DISHED" he yelled back.
Suddenly a loud tharshing noice occuerd. It sounded like gun shoots.
After that there was a deadly scream.
Part Two.
As Nathan walked into the room, he looked for his sister. Kayla was in the corner
of her bed room, she was covered in blood and was wailing in pain. "Kayla...What
happen!? We need to get you to a hospital." Nathan said shockingly. "Nath-a-than.
he tr- tr- tried to ki-ll-ll me." Kayla whisperd. "Whos he?" Nathan responded intrugied.
"I DON'T KNOW!" Kayla bursted into tears. Nathan gently picked her up & carried her
to his room where he looked at his sister. She was just brusied, it looked
like she has gotten beat. Nathan went to get the first aid kit, before he
walked out of the room, Kayla Screamed "Nat don't let me here alone!!!"
Nathan walked back and gave her a kiss on her forehead. "Trust me, nothing is going to
happen" he said in a soft tone, and hugged her. Nathan walked out to the hall way
and got the kit. He rushed to the room. As Nathan rushed to the room tears got
in his eyes. He felt shaken to what just happen. " I will have revange" he murmmerd
to himself as he walked in the room. He began to clean her wounds and humed her
a song to get her to calm down.
It was soon 1 A.M and kayla had fallen asleep next to nathan. Nathan sigthed.
He knew they where comeing back. He began to dose off to wounderland. Then he
heard foot sets and whispers in the crisp nigth air. He stood up from bed and woke
up Kayla. "Kayla Hush! Okay? don't say a thing or move around" he whisperd to her.
- by Smol Pixel IV |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/05/2010 |
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- Title: A Mystery.
- Artist: Smol Pixel IV
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Description:
Its a Mystery about a dude name Nathan & his little sister kayla.
They stumble appart some ones who want to hurt them.
Note :: THIS ISNT A VAMPIRE STROY.
*gosh*
hahaha well enjoy [:
im working on the 3nd part
ask for it ^^ - Date: 02/05/2010
- Tags: mystery murder case hidding gang
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Smol Pixel IV - 03/03/2010
- you guys can think so? [:
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- The Furry Poet - 02/11/2010
- very good maybe u could get it into a book or somethin
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- sweetlyunknown - 02/06/2010
- excellent!!!
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