Her Death Sentence!!!

• Artist: xXSlave-to-GaaraXx
• Description: a short story of how i really feel due to "HIM"
• Date: 10/25/2009
• Tags: death sentence

As death checked thru his list he saw my name; i died from heart break it said. Even death; the bringer of all things evil, and unholy, shook his head in sorrow. As i lay there in bed waiting for death to creep thru my creeky door i thought why not me . . . am i not important to him? The anwser flew thru my mind NO YOUR NOT. The anwser was simple yet . . . it was killing me, HE was killing me. When the door slowly opened it revealed the worst thing; it was HIM he came to save me from my self, from HIM! In a few seconds i awoke still lying there in my thick, warming blanket . Tears began to drip from my tearducts without warning. Just like in my dream the door began to creek slowly open, this time it brang the end, the way OUT, my way out of misery i brang DEATH! My life seamed great before HE came; before i even took a second look at HIM, life WAS worth living, but all thats changed DEATH has brought my life to an end and it's entirely YOUR FAULT!!!

<*simply me*>

Comments

[DeniHazelnut]

well this was interesting, though forgive my lack of deep thinking now (im on winter break after finals, my barin is in potato coach mode) but who is HIM in this story? I dont know if I get it right but for me it seemed the narrator was dying because guy break her heart...and well, if thats the case. She is weak, very weak...Heartbrake is awful, but if someone sumberges into pain then he or she doesn't know the true meaning of life which is learning from experiences...still I enjoy the piece.