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In the stillness of the Night you lie all alone. The only thing you hear is the haunting sound of the once beating heart of your loved one. As you look into the motionless face you hold back the tears stinging in the corners of your eyes. All the happiness in your life fades to nothing. You want to leave but something is keeping you from moving. Like God dropped the weight of the world on your shoulders and there is nothing you can do about it.
You tremble as the door behind you opens and the cold air sends chills down your spine. You turn to see a dark figure dropping to their knees sobbing. It is no other than your best friend and you thank god that she is still alive. as she walks towards you, you try to talk but can't say anything. Your friend looks at you and without thinking hugs you. Her body is as cold as ice. As you both stand and walk away you look back at the one and only love you ever had with tears freezing on your face.
- by lalagirl444 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: The Only One I Truely Loved
- Artist: lalagirl444
- Description: This is the intro to the story I'm writing and I hope you like! Please comment!
- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: only truely loved love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Rian_Lena - 03/24/2009
- Wrong one, this should be in fiction. And there were some small grammar mistakes.
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- Holy cathy - 03/12/2009
- i really like it i'd love to read the rest
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