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...I walked pass the mailbox as I was on my way home...
Thats when I saw something red on the opening. I opened the mailbox slowly and saw a little creature moving back, back more and more back into the mailbox with that red stuff...blood, dripping from his foot. I tried to tell him I was friendly that I wasn't going to harm the little guy. So he trusted me and came in to the grasp of my hands. I took him home and hid him from my mom knowing my mom would get really mad at me for bringing some creature inside the house.
I put him on my bed and he started to climb on the wall. I started to laugh at him and I took him off the wall and I put him in my empty aquarium tank that had no water or no fish in it. I went downstairs and got a piece of left over Roast Beef from yesterday and he for some reason loved it. So I found out that I have his food. Next Day...
I woke up from a nightmare. It was about me walking through a graveyard or what ever. Anyway, I lifted the sheet from the tank, and... the creature was gone... I looked everywhere...then I heard a scream... It was my mom! I went down stairs and saw her with a broom trying to hit it when the little creature burned the bristles off the broom.
I took him off the counter and told my mom he's just a little creature that I found in the mailbox. I went outside to not let her see him anymore. Thats when, I looked up at the sky and saw it was dark red...
Find out what happens next....
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- Title: Outworld
- Artist: The Sly
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- Date: 10/30/2008
- Tags: outworld
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Acid Frenzy - 12/23/2008
- This is fiction. And it is contrived.
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- November blues - 12/16/2008
- keep it up this is interesting
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- Scyair - 12/11/2008
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biggrin Good description of the place where you were going!
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- Baret Bloodstone - 11/01/2008
- Keep it going dude, I know about this contest called "writer of the futrue" you should check into it. Thats what I'm doing.
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- xXS-JayeXx - 10/31/2008
- wat happens tell me!!! lolz
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- ExtremelyAwesomeWolf - 10/30/2008
- she's right u should make a little book. story was cool ^_^
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- Brand-Name Boobies Girl - 10/30/2008
- Thats pretty good. You should write a little chapter book. x)
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