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Boom! Wow my life's about to end. I remember my life. But of all the days to die. Hell is a powerful word, well thats where I'm at right now falling from an airplane thats just hit one of the twin towers. The day 9/11 I would tell you the time but, my watch is gone probally destroyed on the ground. As I was about to tell you the worst day to die on your wedding day and watching your wife die. This is my story of the day.
Riiiiing! "Ah shut up already" I yelled punching the alarm clock. I walked towards my apartments kitchen to get breakfast. Then wife walked out to the kitchen and said "Hey calm down baby today's our wedding" After I ate my breakfast and took a shower. We got ready for the wedding. As she packed her dress into her suit case she said "finnaly it's today"
- Title: Darkest sorrow Part 1
- Artist: gemo123
- Description: non stop action
- Date: 09/28/2008
- Tags: darkest sorrow
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Izluide - 12/05/2008
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its ok, you should try to elaborate more on description. facial expressions emotions and actions are a good way for the reader to make a mental picture in there mind.
ps: spell check probally is spelled wrong its probably, keep at it though smile - Report As Spam