• Shes crying again. But I cant talk to her.... She cant hear me or see me..... its starting to get
    harder to see now.... please, can you hear me?! Hello?! No, please dont go! I..... Please....
    dont.... crying
    YAHHHHHH!!!! gonk wha- what happened...? I had that dream again.... i saw her again, long white hair,my age... its been happening ever since i can remember.... i cant do anything to help her....huh, i can hear foot steps..... Max? What happened this time?Tyoshi said. oh.... hi tyoshi....
    GOD DUDE! I CANT SLEEP WITH ALL THE YELLING! scream Renten said. Nice to see you too.... stare i had that dream again i thought to myself..... but every day she seems more and more real....
    i hear more foot steps.... whats going on now? Mendo said. why is everybody in my room?!
    jeez... get out! I yelled. Tyoshi leaves confused, Renten glares at me and stomps back
    to his room. Max.... whats up with you dude? Why have u been having all these nightmares?
    Mendo said questioning me. Its theses dreams ive been having.... there is this girl and she is always crying..... and the dreams seem to make me feel like im right there..... Mendo looked
    at me as if he had just heard about it. Ria.... He silently said to himself. Who? I said. Uh.....
    its nothing... wink ok if u say so.......

    My name is Max, short for Maxomighty. Im only 16.... i always seem to get into trouble in school and with bullies... Tyoshi is my brother hes just about my height,6'3''.He always looking out for me when i get into to much trouble....My next friend
    is Renten. He always seems to be grumpy, he never is impressed and is very stubborn.
    Oh! I almost forgot. My best friend Mendo. Mendo is the smartest one of the group, he prefers
    brains than brawns any day. Let me just say, Mendo is a total NERD! xd

    To Be Continued! Any good? Comment here about how it sounds! I plan on writing a book too!