- Fade in scene to a darkened, cloudy, sky. Rain pours down and a flash of lightning illuminates the underside of the low-hanging clouds. Another flash of lightning refocuses the scene to a city street, rain falls down onto the cobblestone road and a lone streetlight illuminates the left side of the path. Lightning flashes again to reveal a shadowy silhouette in a trench-coat standing below the light. The man is ominous and wears a fedora. Another flash splashes the scene with white eyes and a crooked smile that remains momentarily as it fades to show another silhouette standing below it. The two figures appear almost identical save for the hands that are now shaking. One hand is thick and bulky, and the other, slender and sharp, with untrimmed nails and swollen joints. The camera pans up to the sky as the strangers shake hands and the rain falls upon them. They laugh menacingly as the camera fades out.
- by Masahiro Watanabe |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/28/2014 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Preppy Kitty - 06/04/2014
- I don't know what is going on in your story, and its really short too, not a good start.
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- Masahiro Watanabe - 04/29/2014
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Part 3 is here:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102814621#title - Report As Spam
- Masahiro Watanabe - 04/28/2014
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Part 2 is here:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102814315#title - Report As Spam