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This story, like many, start with one loney girl sitting all alone by the fireplace. She looks down at her feet while her shoulder length brown-black hair curles fall down around her face. Her brown eyes full of tears knowing it is the fith year that her father is dead and her step-mother gets everything. "I do feel sorry for you," says her step-sister Annabelle as she rubs her back, "sooner or later things will get better for you Irini, tommarrow you and me have to go to the flew market to get things for mother."
Annabelle was her mother's youngest child and closer to Irini's age than her brother or sister who treated Irini cruel like the step-mother did.
Irini hugged her step-sister and went to bed without a fuss. By morning she was feeling a little better, but not worse, her and Annabelle walked past a little shop where the two peeered into the glass to see if it was open. "It looks closed Anna, maybe if it's opened next week we can go in," said Irini. Annabelle liked to be called Anna but even this thought seemed wrong. She shook her head no as she went towards the door and tried the doorknob, "let's check it now or we won't get a chance next week. remember mother is having that party?" Irini shook her head, "that's right I almost forgot, yes let's check it now or else." Irini followed her as they both took hold of a doorknob as there was two doors that had elegant painted glass in the middle with golden handles that made a heart shape. They both pushed down on the lil handles that were on the handle bars as Irini's door opened but Annabelle's door was locked.
They peered in as the soft rock music plaied. "Hello," they both said as they walked in the dark room only lit by the sun through the glass. As they looked around there was glass counters and smaller round tables with chairs on top of them. "Hello, is anyone here," Irini yelled out again. Annabelle was on the other side of the room as she found a door, she placed her ear close to the door and heard the music get changed from behind the door. "Hey over here," she whispered to Irini, "I hear something from behind this door." Irini rushed right over and placed her ear near the door as she listened.
"Are you sure this will work?"
"It has to work, we put all that effort into nothing then if it doesn't work."
"That's true, but why these girls? Did it have to be them?"
Both girls moved away from the door thinking that whomever it was sounded like they were killers. "We should leave before they notice us," said Irini as Annabelle shook her head in agreement. But before they could even take two steps away the door opened up as a young good-looking guy with amazing blue-green eyes with a stern look saw them. "What a handsome boy," Irini said under her breath, but before he could speak Annabelle took hold of her arm and ran out the door pulling her away.
Irini looked back once again and saw the guy ran out behind them but not chase them before he went back inside. "He's not following Anna, we can stop now." But Annabelle just wanted to keep going as a bright light suddenly appeared in the sky.
That's all for now, if you liked it please send me an email if you didn't like it then please stop reading and leave it at that. Again, please look up Tokyo Mew Mew if you have any questions or just ask me. I'm happy to solve anything. I just got bored and without word on my computer this is my only option. This has been in my head but doing Cinderella seemed more right in theme than what I had in mind. Thanks again and I hope you enjoied it!
- by renea-lilith |
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- | Submitted on 12/23/2010 |
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- Title: The Cinderella Mew
- Artist: renea-lilith
- Description: If you have ever heard of Tokyo Mew Mew or Mew Mew Power then you already know, if you don't then let me explain : girls that a supernatual ability and have animal DNA inside them. I finally watched Ever After with Drew Barrymore all the way though and I listen to my mp3 while I'm typing so some of my stories are themed a bit. But this about what the title says.
- Date: 12/23/2010
- Tags: cinderella tokyo mewmew
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Comments (3 Comments)
- KuraXio - 05/16/2012
- I LUVVVVV IT I LUVVV IT Please Do more its very Creative 5/5 (I WOULD DO 50/50 but i cant sad )
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- shade0180 - 02/10/2012
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just fixed the commas and periods and some of the grammar and spellings
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- renea-lilith - 12/30/2010
- this is only just a small posting i can write more if there are a few of you who like it, but again i'm open to any comments
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