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You look great he said after swallowing hard. I looked in the mirror i bought that one and a few outfits the next morning i woke up at Justin's angry scream. there a vampire stood had Justin my the neat as her struggled I turned to a wolf and attacked my bit caused the vampire to let go.A turned back to human (i had learned now how to change back and forth while keeping my cloths on)
and grabbed my dagger that was my sword and stabbed him in the heart preying he was a born not created vampire, wrong her bared his fangs and sunk his teeth into my neck i could feel the blood draining from me i heard Justin screaming and Everything went black.
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- Title: Lost and alone chapter 3
- Artist: SatiricalFaith
- Description: The third chapter to lost and alone
- Date: 11/19/2010
- Tags: lost alone chapter
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- doomsjay - 12/15/2010
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- Syphllis - 12/13/2010
- When doing speech, use quotation marks and appropriate capitalization. For example, "This is speech," not this. Don't only capitalize the first letter of a sentence, 'I's must also be capital. Don't make a run on sentence. Like when you start the next morning, start a new sentence with that, perhaps a new paragraph. When using punctuation, put a space between the punctuation point and the next sentence.
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