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Never look back
Chapter one: Test of courage
As you walk down the stairs, you get the feeling someone is watching you. A cold breeze goes through the small window you see in the corner of the basement.
Even though you didn't want to go there, you continue walking. Suddenly a cold breeze passes your neck and you quickly turn around to see what it was. Nothing to be seen. 'never look back huh..': you say, 'Well I sure did look just now. You can all come out now, stop hiding'. It almost sounded like you didn't want to yell. 'You can't scare me with this silly trick'
A few minutes of silence pass and it only seems to get colder by the minute in the basement. You sigh, as your walking back upstairs…without knowing...anything
'You…can't.. run….. away' Again you look around you, nothing to be seen, your sure that someone is playing tricks and trying to get you scared. 'If you don't want me to leave, why wouldn't you come out and show me who you are' You say, There's a slight hesitation in the sound of you voice as you speak.
'You…won't..run…….a..away' The voice you becomes louder.
'you can't scare me' You say, as you take another step on the stairs.
'I…won't…l…et yoU GET AWAY' As you hear the scream, the door slams right in front of you nose. Quickly you try to open it,but somehow the door is locked. *That's impossible* you think *I have the key right here* and looking at you hand.
'You…think…that…w..ill…help…..you….'
Your whole body freezes and you couldn't move…desperately you look around.. hoping to see who's behind this idea.
'You..never find out.. who does this to you…'
These words shock you, like if it could read your mind
'You..don't…rememb..er me…at….all…?' the voice said
You grab the door handle and with all force you try to open the door. You feel the tears in your eyes, trembling of fear…. fearing whatever is there…
'That…won't…work…you..kn…..ow…tha..t….'
Those word struck..deep inside you…you know it……carefully you gaze into the darkness. You see two tiny little lights, or at least that what you think it is, three small windows and some shelves with some pots on them. Every breath gets harder as time goes by…
'What do you want from me..?!', you shout, as your still trying to open the door
'Look..ing…for…this..?' Every word you here make you shiver
'I'm not looking for anything!, I have the key right h…'
Everything froze at the moment…you feel a strange presense besides you and whispering in your ear
'y..ou don't have …it…..or..do…you…?'
Suddenly you noticed that you didn't had the key anymore, though you where sure to still have it. The only thing you want to do right now is run away from this place, far away…
'Okay, now it's over, you got me. I'm scared, stop this joke at once' Your shout
'You…still..don't…understand…do…you….' The voice whispers…'You…..can't….get…away..from here….didn't…i.told ....you that…be..fore…'
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All was silent…..not one sound…..the only thing you hear…….. is your own heartbeat….
Still…you could here the wind blowing outside… to your own surprise…..you hear something else aswell… only you can't tell what it is…..you have heard it before…somewhere….
Every heartbeat seems to get louder… more painfull….by every beat you feel the pain go right through you
*w..hat is this…* you question yourself…
You feel a soft, yet ice cold touch on your neck….
'now….YOU'RE......MINE..…. !!!'
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To be continued…
- by time13wizard |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/23/2010 |
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- Title: Never look back, chaper 1
- Artist: time13wizard
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Read it.... and tell what your opinion about this is
Read the first 2 lines..., close your eyes for a second and imagine that You are walking down those stairs. (keep in mind that it's your own point of view)
more will come soon - Date: 08/23/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Terre Lyreson - 09/29/2010
- That's really good! I love how you wrote it so that the reader is the one experiencing it. Write more, I'm curious to see what happens next.
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- Shaky jakeward - 09/25/2010
- i liked your story !
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