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I run up the stairs, laughing out of joy. My voice sounded magical, like chimes. But then I abruptly stopped. Someone might notice me. I couldn't be seen; I wasn't welcome here anymore.
I made my way up to the second floor, looking for Carly. People I once knew walked past me like I wasn't there. I saw a girl hiding her face in her locker, obviously crying. I wondered if it was Kristen, but then I noticed it wasn't. I saw her walking, but she then ran into Mrs. Damon's room as soon as she saw me. I started running after her, but someone might notice me. That couldn't happen.
Everyone then disappeared after I blinked. Classes must have started. I make my way down the hallway; I had to leave immediately. But the same girl, unmoved, was still there. I approach her, hesitantly, for she might not want to see me.
I say, kindly, 'Are you okay ?'
The girl, tears down her face, thinks, 'I know that voice.' I know she thinks this. I hear it as if she said it out loud. I fear it's Danielle; she'll run away leaving me no chance to say anything. My former best friend who was scared of me. The girl, with long brown hair, looked up at me.
'Allysa,' I whispered.
My voice sounded caring and beautiful. I hugged her, wanting my friend to feel better. I'm not a bad person. I smiled at her, then we turned to the front door. There were two black dogs, wanting in the building.
Allysa, still unspoken, walked over, sad and defeated, to the door to let the dogs in as I followed. I became highly edgy once I heard loud footsteps. A voice in my head goes off, 'You have to leave! You can't be seen! You're not supposed to be here!'
I turned to Allysa, rushing the words out of my mouth, 'Oh s**t! I have to go now!' I opened the door and said more quietly, 'IM me,' Because it was the only way to communicate with anyone from here. I ran out to the empty world, nothing familiar. Again aware of my pursuit, I I ran as fast as I could, faster than I usually can. I flew away from everything I loved.
- by i saw you in my sleep |
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- | Submitted on 06/29/2010 |
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- Title: Travels Through a Memory
- Artist: i saw you in my sleep
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Description:
I dreamed about the life I had a couple years ago. I know it's confusing. Carly was my best friend. Kristen is my best friend that was currently mad at me. Danielle was my best friend that refused to talk to me. Allysa is just someone I'm friendly to.
I dreamed this when I missed my old school. I wasn't welcomed back for an ..event that happened.
I hope you like it(: - Date: 06/29/2010
- Tags: travels through memory dream
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Comments (4 Comments)
- i saw you in my sleep - 08/01/2010
- Thanks, chimchar556(:
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- chimchar556 - 08/01/2010
- Really good, can't describe how good this is..
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- i saw you in my sleep - 07/01/2010
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Thanks Verstummen.
Yes, it is really confusing, hahha(: - Report As Spam
- vv7722 - 07/01/2010
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You wrote about it just as if it was a memory, so good job with creating the mood.
Frankly though, it's hard to understand for anyone who wasn't there living your life with you.
4/5... it's well written. :] - Report As Spam