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Everytime I flick the light switch on and off I can see him coming a little closer. His pale white face like a ghost in the dark night. The red blood color stretching across his lips, and the darkness that covers his face is strong enough to scare a small child. Oh how I wish he had not been here, still he comes closer, until I start turning the switch and seeing his hand reach out for me. My god, I cannot believe i am carrying out with this deed, heavens forgive me.
As his hand lightly touches my left arm I can tell that he has a vicious idea planned. This time, I turn on the light and keep it on, letting his dark cloak find its way onto my bed as he leans over it. Even with his demonic gaze, I am seduced into looking at him with the eyes of a young maiden that is deeply in love. Oh my god, please forgive this sin! Before my moves could show uncomfortability, he is ontop of the bed. One of his boots is set at either side of my body, still standing on the bed with his head peering down at me.
Those dark black eyes call me, I find myself balancing while working my way up closer to him. His black gloved hand finds mine and pulls me up, now we are standing on the bed in the lit up night. With his arms around me, I can find myself barely breathing. God forgive me, I cannot resist a temptation such as this.
I let his hands slip around my waste and pull me up closer to him, my sheer nightgown flows down to the empty bed. He finds his way to holding me, making even my feet not have to touch the bed. Lifeless as the winter trees, he sweeps me deeper into his arms and jumps off from the bed onto the hard ground. Lightly, he sets me back down onto the ground, making me feel so very short compared to his height. In the quite night, I myself find my hand touching the light switch again and turning it off for good. Knowing my own actions, my own sins, I let a crazed smile find its way to my face while feeling the hands pull me closer into him.
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- Title: Devilish Seduction
- Artist: no longer in this account
- Description: Just a small section that I was randomly typing a while back. Since I haven't had anything to submit I thought I would submit this and see how many people want me to continue. Please rate and leave comments in how you think it should be changed if you view some mistakes. I do take hard comments, please don't be affraid to affend me because like I always put in my pieces, I want you to go hard on me so I can fix any future mistakes. Thank you for your time, I hope you enjoy this piece.
- Date: 04/20/2010
- Tags: devilish seduction
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Comments (3 Comments)
- polar-frostbite - 05/13/2010
- good story!!! could you read mine plz and tell me what you think??? its called halloween eve
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- no longer in this account - 04/20/2010
- Good point, thank you for the advice, I shall use it when I edit this piece.
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- ashleyluv34 - 04/20/2010
- I like it, but you should really put in an intro. Like tell what thesin is or something. Why are you with a stranger? Besides that 5/5
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