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Hi,I am Keeroic
This story begins with a young lady who met a certain man,The Man was tall And handsome
The Lady fell in love with the man and the man fel in love with the lady too
The Name of the Man is:Zand The Name of the Lady is:Wendy
They were deeply in love but Alas
Zand's Father Jan Had already picked a bride for Zand
Zand was quite troubled And Wendy didn't know that fact
So Zand went to his room and asked for his brother
Zand Asked advice from his brother , his brother Ran didn't Reply for he was speechless
So zand told Wendy
And Zand Said My father has decided on a bride for me before we fell in love
Then Wendy said it doesnt matter what happens our love is true and we won't lose
our faith
Zand Said But My father made up his mind
Wendy cried and ran away
Zand felt sorry and wanted her back
Zands Father heard of they're love so Zands father or Jan explained to Zand
My son I have heard that u have fell in love with this girl and Zand said Yes
Father
Zands father said It is okay my son you can go marry her truthly
Ive been waitign for you to get married that why I have been
making Plans for your marriage so Zand Cried with Joy he said
YES!!!
YES YES!!
So Zand went to find Wendy but Alas when he found wendy
It was too late Wendy already has killed herself
Zand Screemed WENDY NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Zand cries- why did you have to die
So in Zands Pain of the lost of his loved one he got his knife and Shouted
WENDY! I WILL PART FROM THSI WORLD SO WE CAN MEET IN THE OTHER WORLD!
He killed himself
But Wendy did not die she was brought to the medics before she would die but unfortunely
for Zand He has lost too much blood to survive So he was dead
Wendy Didnt know about any of what happened but Zand wrote a note to her after the King told
him its okay to marry another so when it reached Wendy,Wendy cried until her heart felt much pain
Thats the end I hope you like it!
-Keeroic
- by Xx_Gin_Soar_xX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/13/2010 |
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- Title: The Valentines Tragedy
- Artist: Xx_Gin_Soar_xX
- Description: A tragedy in Valentines
- Date: 02/13/2010
- Tags: valentines tragedy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Wind-Blown Dandilion - 12/23/2011
- Not a fail at all surprised its actually pretty good smile
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- Xx_Gin_Soar_xX - 07/09/2010
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My 2nd One! I think its a fail >_>
Try this entry its much better much better
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102225590#title#title#title#title - Report As Spam
- Jade J Frost - 02/13/2010
- very romanctic dude. but same as romeo & juliet.. but nice story, nice nice 5/5 MAKE SURE U READ THIS FROM UR PAL smile
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- Xx_Gin_Soar_xX - 02/13/2010
- If you dont like it its okay make as mnay insults as u want lol
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