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The year is 2012...
The world IS ending but not in the way you would think. Humanity is being wiped out by a new species of creature we have come to call Aryans. Anyone familiar to the word Aryan knows it is a "Superior species". Well in this case it is true. Humanity's best weapons turned out to completely useless against these things. We bombed them, shot them, and nuked them. You name it we tried it.
On New Years Eve the world began to shake. Everyone began to panic as you can imagine. But just when it looked as though we were all doomed the shaking stopped. The world held its breath as reports began transmitting all over the world. The world watched in awe as we learned that the world had been split by a massive chasm. Before our eyes these... creatures bean popping out from the chasm.
It all happened quickly after that. A new helicopter filmed as a group of about 12 Aryans attacked a small town in southern Italy. A few seconds after that reports came in from all over the globe about attacks. Within half an hour over two hundred cities had come under attack. Our city was hit at about 2 A.M.
My name is Vincent. I am 18 years old. I stand at about 5'11 and weigh close to one hundred and fifty pounds. I am traveling and attempting survive with my little sister Helena. She is 15 and is roughly around 5'5 and 120 pounds. We both have black hair. Mine is not all that long. Growing just long enough to cover my eyes. the hair on my left side is a little longer though. Helena's Hair is down past her shoulders but she keeps it all tied back in a long pony tail. I have light green eyes and Helena has deep brown eyes.
We lived in foster care for years but once I hit 18 I took me and Helena out of it. It has been tough to raise her and keep her healthy but I have managed for 3 months now. Well that has all changed now... I guess I should tell you about the attack on our town. Pay attention because this can get... Intense... Look for the next part of my story. Forever and a day (part 1:2).
- by RyRyTerrify The Claymore |
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- | Submitted on 01/09/2010 |
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- Title: Forever and a day (part 1:1)
- Artist: RyRyTerrify The Claymore
- Description: Ok so I have wanted to write an adventure story for a while. I have a big one on the go but it won’t be finished for a while and I intend to have it published anyway :) So Here is one that I will make for everyone :D Basically the story revolves around a guy named Vincent and his sister Helena. I will let the rest of the story explain :D ENJOY!!
- Date: 01/09/2010
- Tags: foreverandaday foreverpart11
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Comments (2 Comments)
- RyRyTerrify The Claymore - 05/10/2010
- Heh yeah I have the problem in a lot of stuff I wirte xD I am trying to work on it tho xD
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- Gizensha Sakugo - 05/09/2010
- Pretty good plot idea. I'm interested, and cant wait for more, but the second paragraph gets a little repetitive, using the word world a lot. Here's a tip; show, don't tell. Instead of just saying it outright, try letting them infer it from the details. However, I already like the main character. His personality is coming out even in these first few paragraphs! Keep up the good work! biggrin
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