Alice Shikaru-Day 1

• Artist: Dragons_Never_4Give
• Description: This story was started in my diary and asked my friends if i should enter this.
  This is about 15 year old Alice Shikaru, she starts her diary on the first day of summer break and soon learns something that would've been better if not heard at all
• Date: 01/06/2010
• Tags: story alice shikaru

We follow the storis of Alice Shikaru, Her journal will be converted into a story. Sorta...

Begining-Alice Shikaru
This is the begining
June, 25:
I start this diary journal today, the beginning of Summer break. My name is Alice Shikaru, I am 15 years old. This journal will not be like regular ones. I will be telling my story like those ones in books. I will write in my journal on events that happen and when. Better start this day...

9:24am-
I woke up late today. I recently learned I have to go to 'summer school'
I don't know why. I have staight A's.

10:01am
I just realized this is not summer school.
"Mom why?" I asked
"Well I thought you would like this honey." My mother said
Then we pulled up to a building. In big gold letters on that building said SecretSociety ofGiftedPeople

10:15am
My mom dropped me off. I walked in, WHAT THE HECK IS THIS PLACE! I closed my eyes to remember what my mom said, "Rememeber look for Mr. Samson. It is very important. You can find him on the third floor..." I forgot the rest.....

10:46am
After running around I found Mr Samson. Apparently this is a spy facility. blaugh No wonder my mom thought i would love this. I'm great at this stuff. YAY!!!!!
When i met Mr. Samson he seemed nice. BIG MISTAKE
His voice was sharp and demanding."Hello Alice."
I replied,"Hiya"
He wrote something down and said, "Refer to me as Sir and say 'Yes, Sir' or 'No Sir' when talking to me."
I hestitated, "umm...yes sir?"
"You're getting there, come back tomorrow and your training will begin. Oh yeah by the way fill out this paperwork"
He handed me some papers in an envelope. I walked out

1:25pm
I ate lunch and opened the envelope. I was shocked, "EEKKKK!!!!!!!!!!"

How will i ever do this in one day!

10:21pm
GAH!!!!
just finished all that paperwork. -.- Why does work have to takke so lOng?! I fell asleep shortly after.

End Of Day 1

Comments

[raeflower]

Writing in diary form does not mean that you get that much of a literary lead. You still have to be a writer, it is not a free ride. Loose the smiles. Show emotion differently THAN WRITING IN CAPITALS WITH A LOT OF THESE!!!!!!!!!!! And remember description. If something like this happened to someone, they would describe feelings and settings way more than you have. 2/5