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the year was 2500, there i stode in my space craft looking out the window in the caption seat,looking at space and its darkness. then i heard a voice''um sir, you have a msg from the overlord'',said seth.seth was my friend we met back at school in 5th grade.''ok thanks seth'',i said.then a hologram screen poped up infront of the widow.''hello drako,hows the mission doing'',?asked over lord.''fine but we havent found any crashed ship'',i said.''well i have new intel,the crashed ship is west you cant miss it, look for servoires and bring them back home'',said overlord.''alright'',i said.the screen disapred.i got up from my chair and walked to the lunch room.where my men were.the lunch room was huge with lots of tables and alot of talking.as the door slitd open every one stop talking and looked at me.''the overlord says the ship is west ,so everyone get ready'',i shouted.then the talking started again,i walked out of the lunch room.as i was walking down the hall i bumedt into seth.''hey seth,overlord says the ship is west we should be there in about a hour or so'',i said.''okay sir, ill tell the skylights'',said seth.the sky lights were better then the marines in the lunchroom,they werent my men so it was his job to tell them.''all right'',i said. i walked past him and went back in the captions room. as i sat there looking out the window again my eyes began to get heavy,every since i got in space i would fall asleep in this chair.back when i was 7 my mother said ''when you look out in space you get sleeper'',. i havent seen my mom sence i was 10,the law took me away from her. telling her they need me to get ready for war.that was 13 years ago.then my eyes closed.in my dream i saw my monther and me playng on the playground and laughing together.then it got dark me and her stayed at the playground, i was stareing up at the moon.then she said my favorite saying when you stare at the moon the moon stares back at you.i had a smile on my face.AR AR AR AR i awoke from my dream finding my self in my chair,i looked out the wingdow there was the crash ship,like the overlord said its huge .i got up from my chair and walked to the armory there were my men.''ok everyone get your weapons'',i shouted.every one grab a gun ,then the skylights came in the armory they grabs guns to. we put on our space suits one group was with me and 2nd group was with skylights. we walked to the brieg.the brige was a tube that shot from a ship to another ship.as the tube shot to the other ship i studyed the crashed ship closely.wings torn off glass broken off the windows.we started to walk to though the tube to the crashed ship.we all walked into the crash ship,it was dark no light anywhere.we turned on our flash lights.''ok group 1 come with me,group 2 go with seth look for servivers'',i told every one. as my group walked down the hall of the crash ship we saw bags packed and clothes thrown every where.''looks like they wanted to leave in hurry'',i said. we walked down the hall more then i found a sign on a door it said captions area. the door slilde open we walked inside the captions area.there were broken windows and chairs blocking doors. then i looked out the broken window a big name on the side of the ship it said ''serinity'',. ''i know this ship this was the ship that was going to the planet moth.holding over 5,000 people
on this ship.then all of a sudden we hear a scream.''everyone come on we got to go see who that was'',i shouted.we ran out of the captions room runing down the hall way.then we found seth and his group but one of his people was missing.''seth what happen'',? i asked.''we were just walking to the boiling room then i saw one of my men geting eaten by this thing it looked about 8 feet tall,ribbing out his guts and blood eveywhere'',said seth. then we started hearing walking torwd us. then our flashlights began to lose light.then every thing went black. the walking feet sound was geting closer. i had a lighter in my backpocket.i dont smoke i like to play with it.i push down the button, the fire flickerd then became fire. right there my men i told then to follow me to the captions room we ran down the hall way again we all heard a scream it was right behide me we made in to the captions room we all walked in and the door slamed shut we grab sum chairs and put them agenst it.''ok who ar we missing'',? i asked. ''bill and frank'', said seth. then we heard ''get off of me get off'', from out side of the door .then a cracking sound and gun fireing then nothing. we got behide sum of the tables. after 10 mins or so i got up and looked around again. i looked around the room then i found this computer flickering i touched the mouse.the darkness faded away and then the screen had a thing pop up it said play pause and record i hit play then a man apperd on it he began to talk.''how ever finds this message please help us we are being attcked from some thing'',said the man. then he showed something he began to talk again''you see this bomb go down to the boiling room and but this bomb on the boiler and set it for 6 minuits, do not wait for it to start just run back to your ship and leave,the bomb will be on my desk, please help us'',said the man. then on the screen the man began to scream,then the it stop playing. i walked to the desk he put the bomb on i didnt see it anywhere i pulled out a drawer and there it was.i grab it.''okay every one we need to go down to the boiling room and set this for 6 minuits'', i said, we left the captions room and began to wall down the hall way again''okay seth where is the boiling room'',? i asked. ''follow me and ill show you'',said seth. we followed him and he led us to it. i began to sweat it was geting hot ask we walked down to the boiling room i smelled something really bad we walked into the boiling room. as i looked around there were dead bodys every where some with no head and some with no arms or legs. i got the bomb out and put it on the boiler i set it for 6:00 minuits.''ok every one run now'',i shouted. we ran form the boiling room into the hall way. this time there were maybe 5 feet sounds walking fatser and faster. our lights began to work again we turned them on. there were about 6 of those creatures they grab another skylight. and tore him apart. seth got out his gun and stop runing and began shooting. i yelled at him ''come on seth,we dont have time'',i shouted. ''ill be right there''he yelled back. we ran though the tube into my ship. then i wait for seth. i saw him runing though the tube and came into the ship. i close the tube and i yelled''come on go go go'',.they ship shoot of into space. we stop about 50 feet from it and sat there watching it then a being boom came from the crashed ship. piecse flying every where. we began to fly away. i looked every one.''good job every one we did it'', i yelled. then they all yelled ''o yay'',. i went back to my room and layed on my bed. i was tired and gloomy.i closed my eyes, haveing that dream again.then when i awoke every one was in my room looking at me.''uhhh yes men'',i said. ''sir the monsters on the-e-e ship'', said seth. ''what how, when'',? i asked. ''when we were in the captions room,they must have gone in the tube and hid in the ship'',said seth. ''well how do you know that'',? i asked.''we found his dead body in his room with no head and blood every where'',said seth.i got up and walked to marks room.i open his door, his body was there and blood was everywhere. i walked out of his room and seth and the marines followed me.as i was walking i heard. cracking sounds like a bone breaking.the sound was comeing from the docks.we walked to the docks we were being quiet.then we walked into the docks i looked around then i saw foot prints not human foot prints. as we followed it. i peeked behide the battle ship. there was the moster,but this time i could see him.i studiy him closely he was green and kind of black it looked like he had wings and his mouth was like a dino, full of teethand he had claws and his eyes were redish.i thought in my head.''that cant be a drag--seth interrupied''sir i think it sees us'',whispered seth then i peeked again he was right infront of me looking at me with his eyes.i yelled''run every one'',. we all jumped up and ran.then the monster spread his wing and flew right over us.''i knew he head wings'', i said in my head. the monster looked at us then he swung at us. we jumped out of the way and ran passes him as we ran we took defferent roots i went sright and the 2 skylights went left and seth ran right. as i ran i think the monster followed the skylights. i stop to take a break from runing but then blood was every where i was i keeped walking stright then i saw a door i walked over to it i waited for it slide open but it didnt. then i kicked the door and punched it.finally i slamed my self into it. it flow open.i got up because i fell when i hit the door. when i opend my eyes there right in front of me was blue see though dragon of some kind i just looked at it then i thought to my self''this is crazy dragons arent reall maybe this is a dream,my monther use to tell storys about dragons how they are on this planet'',. as i was thinking it turned to me i stop thinking from the looks of it looked about 2 feet. it began talking but not moveing his mouth,i couldnt under stand it. then it moved very fast even befor i could blink it was right in front of me.''why are you here'',?i asked. then it said something in different lauge i didnt under stand. then i heard laughing from the it.then it said dragon spirit all what i could make out then it like flew into me i began to scream ''ahhhhhh'',. my heart was bumping and my body was burning. as i was screaming i lookd at my hands my nails got longer and sharper. i felt my teeth shapen. my sight became more clear. then i think horns were comeing out of me. i fell on the floor.then i heard seth into the room.''sir? is that you'',asked seth. i couldnt comtrol my self and turned around and i put my hand though him i could see but i couldnt comtrol it.my hand went though his chest and i felt blood runing down my hand. i wanted to scream but i couldnt. i toke my hand out of him.he fell on the floor with blood comeing out.i fell on the floor to and blacked out.when i awoke seth was dead.i looked at my hands nothing was different i felt my head no horns i felt my teeth not shapen i ran out of the room and the monsters have killed all my men.the dragon looked at me and it talked but though its head i under stode''you will sufer human,i have set your bombs in your ship boiler,you will die with us'',. i ran passed them. there was no life pods left.then i knew what to do i ran to a drop pod i jumped in it,closed the door and push the button to lanch.as it droped out of the ship i sat back holding on to the charir handles.i looked up the drop pod had a window.as i sat there my ship exploded into millions of pieces.i didnt want to look anymore. luckly the drop pod has a computer that can talk. ''so where am i going'',? i ask. ''enos'',said the computer.''um whats enos'',? i asked.''enos profile entering, year on enos: is 1600s, population:100,000,000'',.said the computer.''1600s that is when knights and kings where alive, when will i land on the planet?'',i asked.'' 20 minuits'',said the computer.20 minuits was long for me,i cant belive every one is dead on the ship. rest in peace every one. moments later. as i hit enos hemospere. i could see forstest and lakes and more forstets.the drop pod got lower and lower. i was so low i was hiting trees.then i got lower and lower the bottom of the pob was being scraped.soon after that the bottum of the pob was in the grass slideing it began to slow down. the pod stoped right infront of a tree.i sat there for a minuit. i put my foot on the door and pushed against it. the door flew open. as it did i could smell air and grass and hear sounds. i got out of my pod and put my feet on the grass.... TO BE CONTINUED
- Title: dragon spirit
- Artist: anzuren
- Description: drako a 2nd grade caption has mission to find a crashed ship when he gets there thses monsters attack his men he must set the bomb to kill the monsters he only has 6:00s to run who will live and who wont( I WAS IN A HURRY I HAVE MISSSPELLED ALOT SORRY I WILL MAKE IT BTTER BUT NOT RIGHT NOW TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT
- Date: 10/25/2009
- Tags: dragon spirit
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- Little Milkflower - 10/25/2009
- just finished it.................................omg! that was really good!!!! except maybe u shud use the 'enter' key a bit more mah eyes hurt burning_eyes
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- Little Milkflower - 10/25/2009
- dat is ALO of writing
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