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• Artist: Crixilius
• Description: Beginning of Chapter 1 of my novel. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
  I will submit the prologue later on. And I need help with a title for my novel.
  
• Date: 10/07/2009
• Tags: hatred happiness

Zephyr Grace was angry. Not just your typical teenage angst. Oh no, this was a seething, deep-seated hatred for all mankind. Except her. There was always an exception. But nonetheless: Zephy Grace was angry.
Martin Gaither, however, was the happiest man alive. He had finally gotten his diploma and was ready to face the world. Except that he was in the hospital after being hit by a bus whilst celebrating his graduation. There was always an exception.

Comments

[Vrocaan]

Great! I think if you add more to this, it will come out awesome! Nice cliffhanger, too.