- once i was with my sis and friend. we were in the house of our dreams.my mom was a millionare.we were oing to buy this beutiful house.my mom was the best she bought me watever i wanted.i had a plasma tv,ps1,ps2,ps3,ps4,xbox 360,ds,dsi,game boy advanced xp,exp.i had every game and game console ever to be.i had a 2018 car it was on 2009 when this happened. my mom bought the house it had 9 rooms 9 bathrooms and 9 robots to do every thing for u.so once we went in the attic to paint.we saw a red giant button about 20 feet wide and 6.5 feet tall.we pressed it.we should've not done that.when we pressed the button a house apeard it had the same wide and hight then baby vampires came out we tryied to tell evryone else but it was too late me,my sister,and my friend were vampires too we loved blood then they made us some vitamin that tasted like chocolate it made us be able to go to the sun.then when we drank it we were able to be normal people only that at night we drank blood from other people and turned them into vampires too.soon evry single person was a vampire so what we did was we went to the other worlds and we took one dragon,or alien and we drank their blood. every dragon had 200,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 gallons of blood that let us drink blood from one vampire for at least 900,900,900,900,900 years.it was the best thing we ever did in our entire lifes we had so much fun as vampires
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- | Submitted on 10/06/2009 |
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- Title: vampire
- Artist: billiejean123
- Description: vampires in the attic
- Date: 10/06/2009
- Tags: vampires
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Vladraina - 08/05/2010
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its ok but (A) if u read vampire books ud know that if a vampire drinks from a dragon they'll die and (B) if a vampire drinks from a mortil they dont turn into a vampire they rather die or u erase there mind so they dont rember the olny time they turn is if you but u blood into them and (C) can u rate my book?
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- death by loving you - 10/19/2009
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its a good, buT (A) not very realistic (B) cutenninja said it needs more detail (C) no offenice, but it sound pathetic lol!
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- M1dn1ght_Black - 10/15/2009
- Ummmm....maybe next time you should add a little more detail.
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